You generally cannot get help with homework on this site but I will give you my feedback on what you have so far. You have a good start. The first question a machinist will ask himself is not what machines are needed, but what raw material is needed. Is it available? Does he already have something that would work? Then he looks at what processes (like welding) and machines could produce the finished part.
But my strongest suggestion to you is this - paragraphs!! If you want to be taken seriously in the business world you will learn how to structure your writings in paragraphs. By the way - congratulations on spelling, capital letters, and punctuation. I was glad to see that. In this day of texting that all seems to be completely ignored by the younger generations.